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美高SAO家长文书破题 | Elite独家

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2024Fall的美高申请正式启动!上一期Elite团队为各位同学提供了最新SAO学生文书题目的破题解析,收到很多后台好评,同时也有家长呼吁出一篇针对家长文书的破题解析。


24Fall美高SAO学生文书破题 | Elite独家


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接下来让我们一起走进2024Fall申请季的SAO家长文书题目。


 破题详解


1.What are your hopes for your child in their secondary school experience? (200-250 words)


这个问题是要求家长谈谈对孩子在中学时期的愿望或期望。换句话说,学校想通过这个问题了解家长对孩子在中学期间的education(学校教育)和overall experience(综合体验)的目标和期待。


家长可以分享咱们希望孩子在这个时期能够学到什么技能?有什么样的体验?有哪方面的提升?


示范:In my child's secondary school experience, my hopes extend beyond just academic achievements. While I do wish for them to excel in their studies and maintain a strong academic record, my broader aspirations revolve around their personal growth and development. I hope that secondary school will provide a well-rounded education that not only imparts knowledge but also nurtures their critical thinking, problem-solving, and communication skills......



2. Describe an experience that posed a significant challenge for your child. How did your child respond to that challenge?


这个问题要求家长描述一个情境,其中孩子面临了一个比较大的困难或挑战,并解释孩子是如何应对这个挑战的。


我们可以对这个问题进行分解:


1. Describing an Experience:

选择一个孩子所遇到的特定事件/挑战,可以是个人、学术、社交或课外活动方面的挑战。


2. Significant Challenge:

说明为什么从某种程度上说这个挑战是有重大意义的。可以从需要付出的努力、挑战本身的难度来阐述。


3. How Did Your Child Respond:

描述孩子是如何对这个挑战做出反应或应对的。可以具体讲讲他(她)的行动、情绪波动、心路历程以及他们采取的策略等等,来说明孩子是如果解决这一困难的。

示范:

...... there was one particular experience that made me especially proud because it was a moment filled with challenges, yet he displayed great resilience and adaptability.

 

It was during a school academic competition, which was an important opportunity for my child. However, he faced stiff competition and highly challenging questions. He invested a lot of time in preparation, but......

 

Nevertheless,he didn't back down. He remained composed throughout the competition, attempting to address the issues at hand......He demonstrated tremendous determination during the competition and not only completed it but also achieved an impressive result.



以上为Elite团队针对今年SAO家长文书题目提供的破题解析,希望对各位同学和家长有帮助!很多头部寄宿美高也会有自己的独立家长文书需要完成,但万变不离其宗,我们按照“分析关键词——组织结构——提供论据支持——检查逻辑关系”这样的破题思路,就可以“见招拆招”了!


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